tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-623667952217605181.post8055727738671012114..comments2023-08-26T07:26:39.601-07:00Comments on simplyMagnified: the musemichelle ortegahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12948306871519445871noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-623667952217605181.post-78258662230462050892015-04-26T18:27:51.220-07:002015-04-26T18:27:51.220-07:00donna, i have not thought of putting it to music.....donna, i have not thought of putting it to music...i'll let that simmer a bit and see if the inspiration strikes. :-) so glad i could bring you some joy~as i received when reading yours!michelle ortegahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12948306871519445871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-623667952217605181.post-73245710418753673512015-04-26T18:26:22.499-07:002015-04-26T18:26:22.499-07:00you've had so much life in your hands these pa...you've had so much life in your hands these past weeks. when you have the chance to still i know the words will come. happy to bring you some relief. much love.michelle ortegahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12948306871519445871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-623667952217605181.post-24105054166229591372015-04-26T14:08:50.969-07:002015-04-26T14:08:50.969-07:00Michelle, I really am enjoying your villanelle. Ev...Michelle, I really am enjoying your villanelle. Every time I read it I see something else that pulls me in. The rhythm is easy and I'm wondering if you've thought of putting it to music? ;) I do have few favorite lines. "tornadic tangoed lovers’ throes" is one. Also "cages made to self-defend." Yes, that muse - s/he's a perceptive one! ;)Donnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15832335151490704132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-623667952217605181.post-9769266056731387172015-04-26T10:32:46.511-07:002015-04-26T10:32:46.511-07:00imagery with this line is outstanding:
a slow-unfo...imagery with this line is outstanding:<br />a slow-unfolding gossamer rose <br /><br />(it's been a slow leak, this losing of my own self. and not only my ability, but my desire, to write, both have slipped, seeped, scattered. so, you speak of a muse and language and heart - some medicine for me. thank ye.)SimplyDarlenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11716840701917741674noreply@blogger.com